Monthly Archives: February 2012

It’s Thelma’s movie


One of the first things writers learn is that good drama means your characters change, either for the better or worse, within the scope of the story. Why is change so important? Because it doesn’t happen without conflict, which keeps the motor of our story running.
But that lesson really struck me to the core when I took a screenwriting class. The instructor used the example of “Thelma and Louise.”
Whose movie was it? he asked.
It was Thelma’s and Louise’s, we answered.
No. Who was the person who was different at the end of the movie than she was at the beginning. The answer is Thelma. She started out as a mealy housewife who had the fortitude of a Twinkie. At the end, she found strength and resolve. Louise’s personality didn’t really change. So it was Thelma’s story.
Another example, “Ferris Bueller’s Day Off.”
Sure the movie seemed to focus on that charming and funny Ferris. But did he change during the course of the movie?
The answer is no, again. The movie really belonged to Cameron, Ferris’s friend. Cameron went from a kid afraid of his father and afraid of life and to a young man who would stand up to his father and therefore, to life
One more example, “The Shawshank Remptiomption.” Is it really Andy Dufresne’s movie? No siree. It is Red’s, who began the film as a man who dared not to hope and eneded as a man who looked toward hope as he met his friend in Mexico.
Whenever I watch movie or read a book where there is little, no, or God forbid, superficial change in the characters, I feel unsatisfied.
Not all the change has to be for the good, nor does it have to be a lightning bolt from God. It can be subtle as silk.
Take the recent movie, “The Ides of March” (and here comes the spoiler alert)
Stephen Meyers, played by Ryan Gosling, works for a presidentical candidate played by Goerge Clooney, who also directed and cowrote the movie. Stephen starts as a true believer in his candidate and loves being in the thick of the campaign. After learning a secret about the candidate and becoming a victim of dirty behind-the-scenes politics, Stephen also digs into the dirt to stay in the game. He changes for the worse by becoming the very thing he hates.
Of course, some characters are so iconic they don’t seem to or have to change, such as Sherlock Holmes. And there is much joy in watching them make sense of chaos. Still, I think about how much more depth to those stories if Sherlock had showed change.
The game is afoot.

Bless my Valentines


Of course, the first person on my list today was my husband.
For his support of my writing and well, just of me.
But I have other Valentines out there.
Those are the people who critique my work so that it can get better. Those who give build my low morale when the rejects fall like a fist. Those can share in my triumphs when a book is sold. They are the people who realize that when I type away that it is hard, sometimes heartbreaking work and I’m not just playing on the internet (well, not always).
These are my unsung Valentines deserving of all chocolate in Hershey, PA, and of all the love.
I only hope that I do the same for others and will be counted among their Valentines.